What other genres are included in the song and how can you tell? The sentence on ‘daytime’ is weak. Read more into it! Is it all during the day? Same with props, what do they add to the video/narrative – look for meaning. Nice editing paragraph. Add a little more on the above (+ expressions, gestures, body language, etc) and perhaps composition and this could be very good. Currently high level 3 (c+).
What other genres are included in the song and how can you tell?
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Same with props, what do they add to the video/narrative – look for meaning.
Nice editing paragraph.
Add a little more on the above (+ expressions, gestures, body language, etc) and perhaps composition and this could be very good. Currently high level 3 (c+).
Prezi not working!
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